Monday, September 09, 2013

One day, when my friend Jack  was sailing happily on his optimist yacht at pandora pond,l he hit an iceberg. “Oh No!” he said.  The starboard side has a huge hole in it and the boats sinking.  It was such a catastrophe. “HELP!” he screamed.  The lifeguard heard him and came zooming along  in his speedboat and saved him just in time.  Unfortunately, his boat sunk and he does not have a boat any more.  While he was on the speedboat the lifeguard was going too fast . Jack wasn't holding on and fell out.  The lifeguard said, “ Sorry.“   It was another catastrophe.  They made it out of the pond without another catastrophe.  He was cold tired and wanted to go home so he did.  

2 comments:

  1. Great writing Kory, lets hope there are no icebergs on Pandora Pond on your exciting yachting week. I love reading your work on your blog Kory so keep them coming!

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  2. Kory i have just been looking at your blog. Well done on all your posts so far. I enjoyed the piece about the sailing at Pandora Pond. Great words like catastrophe and zooming. Keep up the great work!

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